Our El Dorado

In partnership with 2023-2025 El Dorado County Poet Laureate Stephen Meadows, Arts and Culture El Dorado invites El Dorado County students to explore their hometown through poetry. We will publish every poem we receive from students in El Dorado County on this page. In addition, every poem we receive will be included in a chapbook of Stephen Meadows' own poems, which will commemorate his term as Poet Laureate. Every contributor will receive a copy of the chapbook.
“It is vital that written art forms like poetry remain available to all of us,” says Stephen Meadows. “Poetry is an essential human link that must survive.”
Our El Dorado was inspired by California Poet Laureate Lee Herrick's Our California, a joint project with the California Arts Council, which invited Californians to submit "a poem about their city, town, or state, exploring what they love about it, what joy they find in it, what they would change about it, or what they hope for." Our California poems can be read here: https://capoetlaureate.org/ourcalifornia
El Dorado County Poet Laureate Stephen Meadows
"Gold Country"
The small creek
once I’m sure
had gold
Now dry and deviled
by summer
and dust
I stand here
listening for the sounds
of water
and the cry of one
who has found
his nugget
shimmering
a sun
among stones
Annabella Perez - Ponderosa High School, Grade 10
"A Fading Thrill"
In life's dash, I feel the hassle
Moments scurry, like a farmers cattle
But in stillness, dark as ebony
I find tranquility, a lighter lovely
Not every heartbeat needs to race
Just find its pace
Life's thrill may fade, but serene is gold
In mellow pauses, bliss showed
Sharon Bar-Chen - Oak Ridge High School, Grade 11
"Bug to God"
I crawl around the ground,
looking for food;
Escaping every looming person,
so I do not end up shooed.
I cannot build great nests,
or roar great roars;
I cannot sing great songs,
or fight great wars.
No, I am a bug,
and I survive.
I do not mean to cause harm or annoyance,
I just want to live my life;
I pollinate the flowers and heal the soil,
and run away from many toils,
And as I run from every shoe,
and wonder what I did to you,
I at the same time pray;
for I cannot not do much anyway.
I pray no-one kills me for the crime of being small.
Elijiah Roberts - Oak Ridge High School, Grade 12
"The Boy on Franquette Street"
I’ve always been a drawer since as long as I can remember
Teacher and peers praised me for the coping skill that helped me not remember
Mom and Dad ridden with a disease not able to be cured by doctors
He pretends like he doesn’t know what goes on behind closed doors to protect his innocence
But, the bigger picture is always harder to face when your in the photo
Hopes and dreams of another life lay in the head of the boy on franquette street
His mom is one who gets his creative side from. He’d sit and watch her as she write or color on the couch with the look of concentration and her tongue out
He’d always admire her unique penmanship and how she used to dot the ends of her letters
He’d soon dream a dream for her to write about the hardships and challenges they had to face to get to franquette street
So young, so hopeful and still so much ahead of him
His mother is now gone but her love for him will never be
Born a drawer, but chooses to write for the piece of him that is her
Summer Ray Sparling - Oak Ridge High School,
Grade 10
"The Dreaming Girl"
There was a girl with starry eyes
Wishing on a north star in the sky
Wishing she could find her destiny
Like a north star in her Fantasy
She was like a sailor at sea
Fighting a storm that could
define her destiny
As the waves were getting
Bolder, bolder, And bolder
To the point
The storm
Was blocking the light of the north star
Boom
Crackle
Bang
Said the vengeance and Anger night sky
The girl was fearless
And was not frightened by the loud and tariffing sounds
Coming from the storm
Because the Dreaming girl knew
The north star will lead her home
Maria Rodriquez - Oak Ridge High School, Grade 12
"Thanksgiving"
Next to him, I sit.
In front of me: candelabras, champagne, china, the whole nine feet.
I unconsciously hunch, so I strengthen my back
(looked around to see if anyone noticed)
With precaution, I eat.
Not too slow though,
(they might think you’re ungrateful)
And not too fast
(they might think you’re a brat and impatient)
They’re laughing.
It’s an inside joke, my cheeks grin.
They’re talking.
I take a red sip,
Look back at him,
(how come I haven’t heard about this?)
Suddenly,
I sink
The floor, it’s shelling,
The room, it’s swelling,
My hands, they’re sweating.
I think it’s fatal,
So, seeking for love’s hug that’s nonverbal,
I take mine to his,
But with a deadly, silent nudge,
He gives them back to me.
They’re laughing.
This time,
At me.
California Poet Laureate Lee Herrick
"My California"
Here, an olive votive keeps the sunset lit,
the Korean twenty-somethings talk about hyphens,
graduate school and good pot. A group of four at a window
table in Carpinteria discuss the quality of wines in Napa Valley versus Lodi.
Here, in my California, the streets remember the Chicano
poet whose songs still bank off Fresno's beer soaked gutters
and almond trees in partial blossom. Here, in my California
we fish out long noodles from the pho with such accuracy
you'd know we'd done this before. In Fresno, the bullets
tire of themselves and begin to pray five times a day.
In Fresno, we hope for less of the police state and more of a state of grace.
In my California, you can watch the sun go down
like in your California, on the ledge of the pregnant
twenty-second century, the one with a bounty of peaches and grapes,
red onions and the good salsa, wine and chapchae.
Here, in my California, paperbacks are free, farmer's markets are twenty four hours a day and always packed, the trees and water have no nails in them,
the priests eat well, the homeless eat well.
Here, in my California, everywhere is Chinatown,
everywhere is K-Town, everywhere is Armeniatown,
everywhere a Little Italy. Less confederacy.
No internment in the Valley.
Better history texts for the juniors.
In my California, free sounds and free touch.
Free questions, free answers.
Free songs from parents and poets, those hopeful bodies of light.
Courtney Pesce - Oak Ridge High School, Grade 12
"Calefactive Love"
It is easily felt; the warmth of your want, a genuine heat.
Not blind to desire, I feel how you burn, our fire complete.
Why someone like you, made of bulletproof glass, would chase someone like me,
Who is tempered and cracked, held together by glue, a mere shard you entreat.
As bright as the sun, your presence brings light into all that we do.
The strength of a diamond, our chemistry real and undoubtedly true.
Yet a gem such as this, our sculpture of flame, could abate over time
May our base never break, our shine never fade, and our hearts stay aligned.
Just before dusk, when the sky glows with orange, I think back to you.
Like how sunsets paint color, you’ve shown me your palette, each beautiful hue.
Though my angst interferes, and my woes tend to probe, I mustn't be riled.
“What the future may hold… is out of our reach” I recall with a smile.
With all that is heat, calefaction of us, we cannot be tamed.
Diamonds and sunsets, sunlight and fire, glass made from flame.
Though distance divides, our hearts burn as one, no extent can withhold
How amorous this feels, our love for eachother, true passion foretold.
Ethan Pham - Oak Ridge High School Grade 12
"Memento Mori"
To feel the sand between my fingers slip,
Restraining joy and birthing woe anew,
Is pain enough to render cherubs clipped;
Like songbirds silent, mourning winter’s dew.
Let roses lie unplucked, soft words unspoke,
If soon beneath cold grave dirt must they sleep;
And blessed be the dreaming, lost in smoke,
Naive, still deaf or blind to eyes that weep.
Unwise to fan a flame in icy clime,
I say although my eyes betray a flash,
For snow doth fall here still and it is Time
Who shifts and blows and brings all fire to ash:
And yet our love will blaze, too wild, too strong;
Memento mori—naught remains for long.
Dasia Taylor - Ponderosa High School, Grade 12
Scarlet (from my poetry collection "Left on Read"
the very sense that failed to foresee my death from the toxic liquid i once drank safely
my other senses found it appeasing to inhale his lethal scent that pulled me into oblivion
the grip he held my hand with eventually moved to my throat, suffocating the love we held
the rope he tied slaughtered me slowly
“i still love you” i said
my tears running down what i thought i saw my world with
the steady stream that used to supply the bountiful love i had now quenched my thirst for life's purpose and sustenance
the rain of my soul is now more bountiful than the stream ever was
the salty essence of the rain proved to be fatal
passing my cheek, the downpour wove a vast ocean abundant with the poison you slipped into the rivers that supplied my heart
the culprit smiled a history of knowledge
in his hands, my blood flowed past his fingertips, staining them with the dark sticky warmth from my lifeless corpse
the scarlet river poured from the gaping wound in my heart, thick and hot
pooling around my feet like the stream we used to love
he killed me
yet i still love him anyways
Kaitlin Fuller - Union Mine High School, Grade 10
“That’s the icing on the German chocolate cake”
Grandpa sits me down
And tells of a time
A day in the past
When having a dime was rich
Some might complain
But I am intrigued
No one’s story is the same
They all have something to say
Even if it’s
Little Memory
Or a very long story
I know I must hear
Because I fear the not knowing,
Every story is special
If it’s an adventure
Of a stormy fishing trip
Or a just a walk in a national park
They could be stories
that take forever to tell
It could be about that sport he played
Or a time he fell in love
It could be a memory
Worth celebrating
Like being the champion of the world In old maid
Or the first one to reach over the dash to the next state
Days are limited
And so are stories
So Listen and Share these stories
To make them limitless